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Topic: 'Twas the Night Before Christmas
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halicat unregistered Posts: 583 From: Texas Hill Country Registered: DEC 2001
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posted 12-13-2004 10:03 AM
exceptional, maybe it will be a movie someday ! a true tallent ! great work !!
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Pantera Prowler Junkie Posts: 1216 From: Connecticut Registered: NOV 2004
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posted 12-14-2004 12:38 PM
Great Poem
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Dustis unregistered Posts: 1216 From: Connecticut Registered: NOV 2004
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posted 12-14-2004 01:19 PM
Excellent Mickey !! Home sweet Christmas home
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Marty Usher Prowler Junkie Posts: 13833 From: San Antonio, Texas Registered: JUN 2001
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posted 12-14-2004 03:12 PM
idive- I can believe at least one line in your poem:"I had just fixed a drink and sat down in my chair" : Thanks for sharing your poetry with us!
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ed monahan Prowler Junkie Posts: 33595 From: Cincinnati, OH Registered: JUL 2000
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posted 12-16-2004 10:16 PM
This needs a bump. I will include an email from Roarin
May the blessings of this Holiday Season "Christmas" be yours to enjoy. Twas the night before Christmas and all through the town Not a sign of Baby Jesus was anywhere to be found. The people were all busy with Christmas time chores Like decorating, and baking, and shopping in stores. No one sang "Away in a manger, no crib for a bed". Instead, they sang of Santa dressed-up in bright red. Mama watched Martha Stewart, Papa drank beer from a tap. As hour upon hour the presents they'd wrap When what from the T.V. suddenly caught their ears ? 'Cept an ad.. which told of a big sale at Sears. So away to the mall they all flew like a flash... Buying things on credit... and others with cash! And, as they made their way home From their trip to the mall, Did they think about Jesus? Oh, no... not at all. Their lives were so busy with their Christmas time things No time to remember Christ Jesus, the King. There were presents to wrap and cookies to bake. How could they stop and remember who died for their sake? To pray to the Savior... they had no time to stop. Because they needed more time to "Shop til they dropped!" On Wal-mart! On K-mart! On Target! On Penney's! On Hallmark! On Zales! A quick lunch at Denny's From the big stores downtown to the stores at the mall They would dash away, dash away, and visit them all! And up on the roof, there arose such a clatter As grandpa hung icicle lights up on his brand new step ladder. He hung lights that would flash. He hung lights that would twirl. Yet, he never once prayed to Jesus... Light of the World. Christ's eyes... how they twinkle! Christ's Spirit... how merry! Christ's love... how enormous! All our burdens... He'll carry! So instead of being busy, overworked, and uptight Let's put Christ back in Christmas and enjoy some good nights! Merry Christmas! For God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son that whosoever believeth in Him shall not perish but have everlasting life. John 3:16 >
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SirReal Prowler Junkie Posts: 3332 From: Burtonsville,Md Good ole U.S.A Registered: MAR 2003
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posted 12-16-2004 10:47 PM
Amen!
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